Today I visited three very interesting websites. I visited Jennifer, Jagga and Anisha’s wonderful posts. All the blog posts were really different but they can all connect to the audience in one way or another. For instance, Jennifer’s post talked about summer and how fun travelling is. Her amazing writing skills and imagery made it seem like a was in a plane or as as if I wanted to travel. We are barely half way through the school year and her post made me want to go back to the summer days. Jagga’s post was also like a dream that many people with talents and skills experience. She talked about her singing performance for school and all of her emotion and feelings throughout the process. I feel as though many people can relate, whether you are a dancer and an athlete when it comes down to public performances or games you always feel nervous, but in the end the feeling of success is great and she clearly touched on a relatable subject. Likewise, Anisha talked about a topic that is familiar to nearly everyone, junk food. Her controversial topic was an opening to see different perspectives and ideas. Just as she did with her post, those commenting also left their input on the topic. All three of these posts were well developed and it was a good reading.
G’day Fatima,
I would have loved to flip this post, but remember one sign of a good post includes writing in paragraphs.
Hi Miss W.
Should I edit this and make sure that it is in a proper format for it to be featured in the flip?
Have an amazing rest of your week!
-Fatima
Hi Miss W.
I was looking back at my post and it was written in paragraphs. May you please explain, because I am quite confused.
Thank you, have a great rest of your week! 🙂
-Fatima