Clown Sightingss



It was a dry, hot, summer evening, in Arizona. Not to mention, it was Friday the 13th. Maddie, 15, and her old sister, 23, are on a road trip to their grandmother’s house. It was a pretty scary evening because a lot of paranormal activity was happening in their household and they wanted to get out of the place. On the road, there was just one single car, it was their’s. It was freaky, one road, one car, and a field of dead grass. The two were in their car, jamming out to their music, then all of a sudden a clown, small, bloody with a deformed faces lies in front of them, with a chainsaw. Each second, approaching the vehicle.

52 thoughts on “Clown Sightingss

  1. Oh my gosh! I love your little story about the clown sighting! I think you should make it into a longer narrative, maybe add what happens to them!

    • Hi,
      I will probably make this narrative longer so you can know what happens next! Thanks for the compliment. I love your blog by the way!

    • You should! It’s really fun being creative with your words to create a story that other people will enjoy. Thanks for the comment.

  2. I like that you used a modern problem in your story. Where I live, clowns are starting to appear, it was Halloween yesterday and stores stop selling clown costumes.

    • Ya! It’s a shame that the clown sightings are having a negative impact and pushing people to extremities, some (clowns/ or even passerby’s) even get killed accident. At the start it was suppose to be just for the chills and for fun,but not anymore 🙁 Thanks, for the comment though!

  3. I love how you wrote about something that some people might have experienced before. Your story gave me a lot of suspense and curiosity of what happened next!

    • Hi,
      thank you so much. Ya, I tried to make the story relate to something that other people can experience, it gives more fright to the narrative. I do hope to finish it, so stay tuned, maybe you can see how it all unfolds!

  4. I love scary and creepy stories. It makes me think of when i saw a clown at a fair. I still want to know what happens to everyone, do they get away or do they have a horrible death.

    • You’ll have to wait and see I am going to finish the story (really soon I hope). Thanks for commenting and checking out my blog.

  5. I really like the story because I was going to dress up as a clown for Halloween but my mom said no. I also saw a clown near where I live so I saw your blog so I thought I should read it and it gave me chills.

    • Thanks! Ya this clown sighting thing is pretty freaky in the States. Costume stores even stopped selling clown masks in some States.Thanks for commenting!

  6. I liked your story on a clown sighting because it makes suspense grow and wonder what will happen next. I have a few questions, what was the 23 year old’s name and what while happen next.

  7. I remember when I was really little I went on a road trip and got lost. We were the only car for miles, it was freaky. Great story, you should publish the ending later.

  8. Hello,
    I really liked your post on clown sightings. Although it was a narrative it does actually happen so it is also informative. I thought that making it a narrative is very creative. I liked the way you described the area because it really brought a picture to my head. If I had any feedback it would be that I want to know more so maybe make a part two.

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    • hi,
      Thank you for your thorough comment and feedback I’ve been trying to find an end to this story but it is quite challenging, do you have any ideas for the end? I’ll make sure to check out your blog 🙂

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