It was a dry, hot, summer evening, in Arizona. Not to mention, it was Friday the 13th. Maddie, 15, and her old sister, 23, are on a road trip to their grandmother’s house. It was a pretty scary evening because a lot of paranormal activity was happening in their household and they wanted to get out of the place. On the road, there was just one single car, it was their’s. It was freaky, one road, one car, and a field of dead grass. The two were in their car, jamming out to their music, then all of a sudden a clown, small, bloody with a deformed faces lies in front of them, with a chainsaw. Each second, approaching the vehicle.
I like your story, it is so freaky!
Ha! thank you, I love scary, paranormal stories.
Oh my gosh! I love your little story about the clown sighting! I think you should make it into a longer narrative, maybe add what happens to them!
OMG! Thank you, I probably will make it a longer narrative, I really like writing creative pieces 🙂 Thanks for the suggestion.
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Hi,
I will probably make this narrative longer so you can know what happens next! Thanks for the compliment. I love your blog by the way!
I really like how the story is going, it makes me want to imagine an end to it.
Thankss! I’ll probably finish the story.
I love your story it’s so nice and clean plus you have a great story line it really captures your attention.
Thank You for the compliment! I might be able to finish the story, so you can check it out when it’s done.
This was really good! I would really like to read more about this story. You should really make it into a narrative.
Thanksss! I’m still working on the final product hopeful it will be done soon!
That’s one spooky story! I loved it. Making up a story for a post is a really cool idea, I might just try it.
You should! It’s really fun being creative with your words to create a story that other people will enjoy. Thanks for the comment.
i loved your story it gave me chills
HAHA! It gave me chills writing about it 🙂 Thanks for the comment.
I like that you used a modern problem in your story. Where I live, clowns are starting to appear, it was Halloween yesterday and stores stop selling clown costumes.
Ya! It’s a shame that the clown sightings are having a negative impact and pushing people to extremities, some (clowns/ or even passerby’s) even get killed accident. At the start it was suppose to be just for the chills and for fun,but not anymore 🙁 Thanks, for the comment though!
I love that it is scary and about clowns. Hope to see more,and I really want to know the ending.
Thank you, I hope to finish the narrative so people can see how it all unfolds!
I love how you wrote about something that some people might have experienced before. Your story gave me a lot of suspense and curiosity of what happened next!
Hi,
thank you so much. Ya, I tried to make the story relate to something that other people can experience, it gives more fright to the narrative. I do hope to finish it, so stay tuned, maybe you can see how it all unfolds!
Did you know this is really happening all over the world? There is clown sightings everywhere!
I Know it’s really scary, but it mainly happens in the US.
The title automatically grabbed my attention! I really enjoyed reading this!
Thanks Grace! you always need a good title to get people to read a story 🙂
I loved this! and I like how you left it as a cliff hanger so we can think out the rest!
Thanks you! Ya I like you know how my readers would end the story! But I hope to finish it as well.
I love scary and creepy stories. It makes me think of when i saw a clown at a fair. I still want to know what happens to everyone, do they get away or do they have a horrible death.
You’ll have to wait and see I am going to finish the story (really soon I hope). Thanks for commenting and checking out my blog.
I really like the story because I was going to dress up as a clown for Halloween but my mom said no. I also saw a clown near where I live so I saw your blog so I thought I should read it and it gave me chills.
Thanks! Ya this clown sighting thing is pretty freaky in the States. Costume stores even stopped selling clown masks in some States.Thanks for commenting!
I liked your story on a clown sighting because it makes suspense grow and wonder what will happen next. I have a few questions, what was the 23 year old’s name and what while happen next.
I meant to have a question mark after my final sentence.
Opps I guess I forgot to mention her name 🙂 but I will finish the story soon so you will know what will happen! Thanks for commenting
I remember when I was really little I went on a road trip and got lost. We were the only car for miles, it was freaky. Great story, you should publish the ending later.
this was a really good story! Makes me want to know what happens next
I love how you wrote about the clown epidemic going on!
if i saw a clown i would flip out and run from it or I would hit it
I like how you put clowns in the story because to me it makes the story creepy.
I really like your story. It makes me wanna know what will happen to the 15-year-old and 23 year old.
You’ll need to stick around and find out when I finish the story! Thanks for commenting
Your story is so creative and suspenseful! Love how it keeps the reader asking questions!
I like your narrative about clown sightings! I like narratives like that!
I would also like to know what will happen next!
You’ll need to stick around and find out when I finish the story! Thanks for commenting.
I like your story it was freaky and a little bit dramatic.
I like how you made the problem come out of no where to spice it up.
Thanks!
I read your story and I am not scared of clowns. I would of ran over them
Hello,
I really liked your post on clown sightings. Although it was a narrative it does actually happen so it is also informative. I thought that making it a narrative is very creative. I liked the way you described the area because it really brought a picture to my head. If I had any feedback it would be that I want to know more so maybe make a part two.
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hi,
Thank you for your thorough comment and feedback I’ve been trying to find an end to this story but it is quite challenging, do you have any ideas for the end? I’ll make sure to check out your blog 🙂